Draft Development Support – Strengthen Your First Draft

You’ve written the words. Now you need a trusted eye to assess where your draft can shine brighter.

The Draft Development Support service gives you targeted, honest, and constructive feedback to help you elevate your writing, while honoring your voice and creative choices.

Who This Is For

Writers with a full first draft of a novel, story, resume, or creative piece
Marketers or professionals needing storytelling refinement
Anyone looking to improve structure, flow, tone, or engagement

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What’s Included

In-Depth Manuscript Review

High-level structural feedback
Analysis of narrative flow, pacing (notes on scene adjustments)
Scene and pacing adjustments
Suggested opportunities for clarity, emotional impact, and purpose

Editorial Feedback Report

PDF summary of key strengths & growth opportunities
Detailed page-by-page or section feedback
Suggestions for revision, rewrites, or polish

Timeline & Deliverables

Review turnaround: 7–14 business days (depending on word count)
Email check-in after delivery for questions
Optional follow-up video session (30 mins)

You’ll Walk Away With

Clear direction for revising your draft
Insight into where the best connective material lies in your writing
Confidence to begin the next phase of refinement

Frequently Asked Questions For Draft Development Services

Do you rewrite the piece for me?

This service includes editorial analysis and feedback, not ghostwriting. You receive expert notes and suggestions, but you remain the author of your revisions. Inquire separately and we can discuss ghostwriting services.

Can I book this for creative or professional writing?

Yes. I work on both fiction and nonfiction including resumes, bios, blog posts, or personal writing.

Want to See What’s Working—and What Needs Work?

Let’s bring focus and precision to your draft.

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My goal as a professional writer, editor, and proofreader is to help you shape stories with care, clarity, and confidence.

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